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Sunday, 07 December 2014 07:39

Weaving The Threads

There comes a point in every suspense novel I write where I wonder if I truly have dementia. I’d be convinced of it actually, if not for the fact it occurs in the same place every time.

I start out fine. With a detailed outline and a clear vision of my opening scenes, I power through the first hundred pages. Then things slow down. Understandable. Lots going on, lots of character threads to keep track of.

But then comes that moment, deep in the third quarter, in the lead up to the climax scene, where those threads just get in such a tangle my progress falters or stops completely. As it is right now with my current story.

As it has been for the last five days!

I know what happens in the climax scene and I know the ending. With 280 pages written and the rest in detailed outline form I know where I’ve been and I know where I’m going. On this journey that has taken close to nine months I can see the finish line. So why can’t I get there?

The only thing that gives me hope is that I’ve been here before. This exact thing happened with the last book I wrote, and the one before that, and I always managed to work my way out of it. It takes time and it’s frustrating but I eventually get there.

So today, instead of trying to ram my way through, I’m going to do something that’s helped in the past. My goal for the day is to simply write out each character’s version of the story. I’m going to take each of my three main characters and each of my three secondary ones and summarize the story according to them. Six separate individual journeys.

The reason this works (and the reason my problem exists in the first place) is because I write from multiple points of view. If I wrote in only one character’s pov this wouldn’t happen. But because I’m in the head of several different characters I need to know what each one is thinking – what they know, what they don’t know and what their experience has been so far.

By the time you get near the end of a story that’s a lot of information to keep track of. (So I’ll cut myself some slack in the dementia department.) Because no single character knows everything that’s happened. Each one has had a different experience. Only by knowing and clearly identifying my threads can I hope to weave them all together.

I’ll let you know how things turn out. In the meantime I’d love to hear if others have this same problem and if you’ve found any other tricks that work for you.

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